Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 5, 2020
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wow ilove orangutans but there needs a bit more info
ReplyDeletei know i had to do it in 15 mins
ReplyDeleteits good but you need more info
ReplyDeleteits amazing WELL DONE but do a little bit more info
ReplyDeletebut GOOD JOB
Hi Luke,I am Anthony from Waikowhai Primary School.I really like how you added detail to your work I did not know orangutan's eat honey and bark I thought that they ate banana's and leaves.I also did not know that they were from the rain forest I thought they lived just in African zoo's.Could you maybe add more information to your work so I can learn lots about orangutans. do you know what fun things they would do at the zoo's?if they were stranded in the middle of know where what would they do and what would they eat?I really like you work I hope this comment help's inspire's you to do some research .could you please check my blog at this link https://wpsanthonys.blogspot.com/ thank you.
ReplyDeleteok thank you
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