Hello bloggers
I'm gonna talk about my horror story called
Under The Bed!
Friday, March 19, 2021
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hi luke i really like cause i like horror to i was good you should just not bedside that the rest that its really good
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ReplyDeleteI like how you said piercing scream instead of just a scream from downstairs. I also liked how you said glowing red eyes. maybe next time use some more grammar like how you said he runs a sprints down the stairs.
hi Luke i really like your story about under the bed i liked the ending so if if i could rat it i wood give it a 10 out of 10
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